I'm more used to mixing clean vocals but this seemed fun to do. Here's my attempt, see what you think: https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/54670388/nightfall.mp3
I thought I'd give this a bash too. Obviously if vocals are meant to go on top I'd remix it https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/54670388/Hear%20Me%20Now%20edgespear%20mix.mp3