yeah it sounds like Structures, Volumes and such bands, i think you could stand out if you added something new to the style.
but nice mix dude, i dig it, even though it seems a bit muddy, maybe because it's youtube quality
haha that's smart dude, great mix.
they sound like the bastard child of misery signals and underoath
guitars sound a bit hollow/lifeless. don't know they lack presence or something
i think snare is kinda weak. and the sound of that kick might not survive in a mix with bass and guitars
that's why you should record every other instrument to tease a drum sound imo.