The kick definitely needs bringing up, and I don't know whether you're recording a real kit or using a program but the snare needs more velocity in some of the hits. Other than that, it's sounding good to my ears.
Best damn post I've seen in this thread, how it's been an open thread for so long I don't know. Yes, this is my first post, yes I post over at SS, no that is not why I'm here.