A bit of Bloodbath anyone?

[clarbaden]

eaten cover 1 minute, please feeback

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/2412166/eaten.mp3

 

[Mago]

a bit bassy^^

 

[clarbaden]

EDIT, update https://dl.dropbox.com/u/2412166/eatendifferent bass.mp3

 

[clarbaden]

update 3 https://dl.dropbox.com/u/2412166/eatennewwww.mp3

 

[clarbaden]

no one wants to comment eh?

 

[Damian B]

I'm listening on shitty laptop speakers, but the vocals sound too loud to me.

 

[allplaydead]

The bass is out of control man turn that shit waayyyy down

 

[clarbaden]

Use the original as a mix reference maybe?

Your vocals are very good (wish I could go that low- I'm stuck with the Jeff Walker voice for better or for worse), but maybe add a bit more compression to them, they sound a little plain in that regard (could also be your delivery, maybe add a little more ferocity and energy to it- in short, be meaner and more pissed off). The guitars are very flat, not enough low end on those.

Other than that, I'd say try to balance everything a bit more volume/eq-wise, seems like you've got the performance part of it down pretty well.

What drum procress are you using (real, MF, AD, SD2.0)? IMO thyis is the weakest link, they add no power to your recording, needs moar powah!

cheers for the possitives on the vocals. im using slate drums, i might have a play around with some paralell compression

 

[clarbaden]

UPDATEEE https://dl.dropbox.com/u/2412166/eatennnew mix.mp3

 

[clarbaden]

LAST and final UPDATE https://dl.dropbox.com/u/2412166/eatennnew mix44.mp3

 

[allplaydead]

I think the second to last update sounds better than the final one, everything seems more balanced.

In the last and final update the drums are too loud, specifically the bass drum.

 

[Wisheraser]

Honestly, tighter playing would make a WAAAY bigger improvement than anything mix-wise.

 

[clarbaden]

Honestly, tighter playing would make a WAAAY bigger improvement than anything mix-wise.

yeah i agree but its so hard to keep it tight because the guitars are tuned to A

 

[clarbaden]

Here we go this is it https://dl.dropbox.com/u/2412166/eatennnmix a million.mp3

 

[vaiman]

UPDATEEE https://dl.dropbox.com/u/2412166/eatennnew mix.mp3

Best version to my ears as noted earlier. Hope you saved a copy of all these mixes lol
Some serious vocals dude