Advice for a metalcore mix/master

[mattsdeli]

Hi guys,

This is a song I wrote, recorded and made a mix/master.

I know it's not perfect, so far, it's my point.

What I have to do to make a mix/master sounds pro ?

I used Superior Drummer 2.0

TSE 808 and TSE X50 for the guitars.

The bass is a midi bass with bassDSK.

I used TSRacks 3 for the mastering !

Thank you in advance guys.

 

[Mike Moriarty]

I would bring the drums down in the mix a little and add some more high end to the guitars.

 

[mattsdeli]

Hi,

This my new mix/master !

What do you think ? And what I have to do to have a better sound ?

This is the kind of mix I want to have : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9I8cVlZDOT4

This is my Master : https://soundcloud.com/mattsdeli/mastersong2013v2
My mix : https://soundcloud.com/mattsdeli/mixsong2013