I really liked it man, strong melody going on and the vocals fitted in quite nicely too. The kick sounds slightly mechanical, does DKFHS have a humanize function, and was it on? If so maybe try and find a slighty more organic sound for it, just a small thing anyway. Plus the lead section at the end sounds a bit dry, maybe put a short delay and/or chorus on it.
About the Humanizing, i think was turned on, but i'll try to fix that by movind some velocity bars... and the lead in the end... and thank you very much ....... here's another version... less compressed master.... i thought guitasr's masking some drums after that compression...