another mix...

Sounds like the bass drops out completely at times.
Really like the different guitar sound at the end.
Get a nice bass and drum sound, take some time on this. Add tight guitar parts with the the "new sound" and I think you will be well on ya way
 
@Laneismusic, all I can say is read alot on this forum and practice alot, but I mean... alot! and don't give up.

@vaiman, yes the bass could be more compressed, didn't spent much time on it but I shall give another update when I worked on everything.