any input would be amazing!

[chase10193]

hey everyone, im just starting out with learning how to record/mix/master/etc,
i have a song ive been working on and seem to have run into a wall with it dont really no what else to do with it, if anyone could help point me in the right way or give me some feedback on it that would awesome! thank you for your time!

https://www.dropbox.com/s/jy1awju9abv9on5/new believe song.mp3

 

[Master Buss]

The mix sounds good. Chugging needs tightening as well as guitars are out of tune a tad at .44 - .54 seconds.
Dig the change at 1:37 - watch the tuning on the chords.
Seems the end losses energy a bit
Could end track on with same riff at 1:15 would be cool


Listening on: Headphones, Boombox

 

[chase10193]

thank you for the input. glad to hear it dosent 100% suck.

 

[alex-sonic]

Did you put reverb on your guitars? Don't know if it's the chugs that are not tight enough or reverb? But IT seems a little too muddy to my ears but I have not my monitoring system with me juste listening with a Marshall Major that is new so it's maybe me.

The riffs are pretty good! Kick is too high I think and did you make a cut in the 400-500 area? I find it too present in the mix. What did you us for the drums?

 

[chase10193]

drums are programmed using addictive drums