Anyone want to bust out a melodic 4 bar solo?

[Terminus]

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/994726/Composite%20-%20Aphotic%20solo%20section.mp3

When the slower breakdown-ish part comes in, i was looking for a nice short and sweet solo in the soilwork vein. You name goes on the thing when it's done of course. And this isnt anywhere near the final mix, or even gonna be mixed by me (whew!) Any takers?

B standard btw.

 

[Vicioushead]

I could give it a shot if you like.

 

[Terminus]

Sure man!

 

[Vicioushead]

Here's a rough draught. I think I'm going insane because I checked my tuning 30 or so times and it still feels slightly out with the track.

Anyway, check it out.

 

[Terminus]

Beautiful man! Yeah I'm probably the one slightly out of pitch Can you send that wav my way via PM? And let me know your name too. Thanks bro!

 

[Vicioushead]

I'd like to tidy it up a bit for I send it to you...have a few more shots at it. Some of the vibrato is not as perfect as I'd like it to be.

Also, I was having some hum noise that I don't normally have when recording...