As Blood Runs Black Vocal Tryout *NEW MIC*

It's pretty fucking awful, but ABRB are pretty meh, so whatever.

Indistinct lows. Highs are just irritating. The problem is more with the style than with you, but either way this is really annoying.

The highs should be less high and more raspy than screamy. The lows should be less low and you should focus on enunciating more clearly. You have plenty of power, at least.

The shouting you should probably just dispense with.
 
The sound quality left a lot to be desired, but your vocals are pretty dece. Keep at it, and consider investing in better recording equipment.
 
I may have a new mic but its still only a 30 dollar upgrade.
i dont have good equipment to record.
this limits what i can do. everything sounds much better raw.

but thanks for the feed back.
 
definitely have some talent there i would say. maybe even just try distancing yourself from the mic a bit... sounds like there's some undesirable digital distortion caused from peeking. when u record try and keep the master close to 0, that way u can avoid clipping and still have room to add compression etc.