If anyone cares to listen, I've tried out recording some somewhat bloodbath-inspired death metal recently. Some feedback would be cool (and yes, I'm aware the vocals are the worst part). If anyone digs it and wants to have a shot at the vocals I can upload the instrumental.
http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=93E467C658A4B618
Lyrics as follows:
You will breathe the air of flames
Choking for every single breath until you're claimed
The violence of fire won't bring new life
everyone is burned alive without a trace
No love nor sacrifice will prevail
All hope has died with God
A virgin and her mother
Will call his name then curse him thrice
In burning flame their heaven dies
No one will march to save you
No trumpet call to herald vengeful angels
Their wings as broken as their necks
You try to die before your blood can boil
Your blackened flesh is just a feast for evil
A beating heart will just prolong the torment
Insanity claims you as you
die
There are no survivors
The fire joins them in death
No more love or longing
The Sun is frozen as it sets
http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=93E467C658A4B618
Lyrics as follows:
You will breathe the air of flames
Choking for every single breath until you're claimed
The violence of fire won't bring new life
everyone is burned alive without a trace
No love nor sacrifice will prevail
All hope has died with God
A virgin and her mother
Will call his name then curse him thrice
In burning flame their heaven dies
No one will march to save you
No trumpet call to herald vengeful angels
Their wings as broken as their necks
You try to die before your blood can boil
Your blackened flesh is just a feast for evil
A beating heart will just prolong the torment
Insanity claims you as you
die
There are no survivors
The fire joins them in death
No more love or longing
The Sun is frozen as it sets
