Can I get some feedback on my current Mix?

[DaNewm]

I would love to hear some feedback and critique in regards to this song! Thanks for your time!

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/9395451/Cartographer Mix 9.mp3

 

[acappa]

Link doesn´t work.....

 

[DaNewm]

This should - http://dl.dropbox.com/u/9395451/Cartographer Mix 9.mp3

 

[Unavailable]

Nope, it's not in your public folder.

 

[DaNewm]

Fixed it! My apologies! I was told to give this forum a shot! Totally new to it! Link should work now!
https://dl-web.dropbox.com/get/Cartographer Mix 9.mp3?w=56d0576d

 

[kramer1309]

umm.. you need to give a public link.. the links you've posted are ones only you can access, if logged in.

a public link:
-would start with http:// instead of https://
-be of the format dl.dropbox.com/.... instead of dl-web.dropbox.com/....

 

[DaNewm]

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/9395451/Cartographer Mix 9.mp3

- my most sincere apologies to everyone!

 

[kramer1309]

no worries about the files..
the leads sound very separated from the rhythms..
the lows are very cloudy/muddy.. check the bass/kick/guitar's low mids and lows...
wayy to scooped man..
the clean sounds pretty cool on its own..

 

[KHE]

i really like this raw-sound! guitars maybe a bit over-gained imho.
but i would work on the snare a bit, there is a strage resonance-note in the mids with long sustain... (~400Hz?) i would try to cut it with a high-q eq.

regards, khe