Can you rate my cover, please!

[Talmaci]

HI guys! This is my second cover and for the first time a mix drums from the beginning to the end. I was using superior drummer. Can you tell me please what I need to add and what I need to remove to get perfect tone! Thank you very much!

 

[ArthurD]

You should work on that playing a bit more, its too sloppy IMO.
About the drums, I suggest humanizing the MIDI, specially snare rolls.
Also, that snare sounds thin and the cymbals are harsh. Kick is sounding good here. I can barely hear the toms.
A good way to improve your drum mixing skills is reading the systematic productions mixing guide, it will help you a lot!
How hard are you compressing the snare?