CloudShift Progressive Metalcore/Deathcore from Port Arthur,TX

Hi we're CloudShift from Port Arthur,TX were a 4 piece progressive Metalcore/Deathcore
were on here to gain fans and friends and bands!!!!
You can like us and share us on facebook www.facebook.com/cloudshiftmusicsetx
or on Twitter @CloudShiftmusic
heres a preproduction with our old singer while we record our demo
CloudShift - Boats Be Backwards Bathtubs (Pre-Production) - YouTube
http://youtu.be/0BuPAbq7Sk4
 
This is completely personal preference!
It's not bad, Could use a good volume boost to get the full effects.
Loud and Proud is always A attention grabber!
Vocal are good, Lyrics could be touched up a bit, BUT Music is all about getting your thoughts out there, so nobody has any place to tell you what to sing about!
Pace could be a little quicker, but also depends on the style your going for.
Guitar is a bit all over, A little bit tighter, and not so many different rhythms would give it a cleaner play through.
Its a good place to start though, and I am sure you guys will fall in line the more you play. Just keep getting your stuff out there, and make sure you put as much emotion into as possible.