CloudShift Progressive Metalcore/Deathcore from Port Arthur,TX

[CloudShift]

Hi we're CloudShift from Port Arthur,TX were a 4 piece progressive Metalcore/Deathcore
were on here to gain fans and friends and bands!!!!
You can like us and share us on facebook www.facebook.com/cloudshiftmusicsetx
or on Twitter @CloudShiftmusic
heres a preproduction with our old singer while we record our demo
CloudShift - Boats Be Backwards Bathtubs (Pre-Production) - YouTube
http://youtu.be/0BuPAbq7Sk4

 

[Tevlok]

Taking feedback?

 

[CloudShift]

Do it

 

[Tevlok]

This is completely personal preference!
It's not bad, Could use a good volume boost to get the full effects.
Loud and Proud is always A attention grabber!
Vocal are good, Lyrics could be touched up a bit, BUT Music is all about getting your thoughts out there, so nobody has any place to tell you what to sing about!
Pace could be a little quicker, but also depends on the style your going for.
Guitar is a bit all over, A little bit tighter, and not so many different rhythms would give it a cleaner play through.
Its a good place to start though, and I am sure you guys will fall in line the more you play. Just keep getting your stuff out there, and make sure you put as much emotion into as possible.

 

[CloudShift]

The track isn't even going to be used. It's old but it's the only thing we have to offer at the moment.
Thank you for your input like the page if you would like we need all the help

 

[Tevlok]

Sure bud, Just keep at it!

 

[CloudShift]

Thanks