I don't need you to tell me its terrible, I already know it is 
I'm just at a loss here and looking for any tips or suggestions you guys might have.
http://snd.sc/11cCXk1 (soundcloud)
new mix: https://soundcloud.com/kaempfer/death-metal-mix-update/s-7NV8X
Thanks!
p.s that sub drop is there for my brother's amusement, ignore it.

I'm just at a loss here and looking for any tips or suggestions you guys might have.
http://snd.sc/11cCXk1 (soundcloud)
new mix: https://soundcloud.com/kaempfer/death-metal-mix-update/s-7NV8X
Thanks!
p.s that sub drop is there for my brother's amusement, ignore it.