Criticize my mix?

[heretheycome...]

I recently came across a SUPER chilling 911 call and decided to make a short track with it in the background. I do realize the guitar isn't all that creative, but that's because I've hardly touched guitar in my life ;P. Just thought I'd see if anyone had any constructive criticism mix-wise!

And here's another that I used the same templates and processed everything the same way. My friend did guitar and I think there's a few notes that are off, but it was something we threw together really quickly haha.

 

[3tuxedo]

dude, first of all, that phone call is messed up. second, im digging the guitars actually, there are a lot of people on here who think it should sound a certain way just because, but i like it. If there is a bass in there, i cant really hear it. that would make the guitars rip up even more. The snare needs a smidge less poppiness imo, but i like the kick a lot, maybe try to add some lower frequencies to it, get it to cut through. overall though dude its pretty nasty, i like it.

 

[oz_golf]

very life less both song. pan them more. Guitars sound very low volume. snare is louder than everything.

 

[heretheycome...]

The guitars are hard left and right haha. But yeah, I always tend to focus on the drums more, since I am a drummer lol. And yes, the call is super messed up haha. It was the only thing I could find on YouTube that wasn't some stupid, cheesy fake call lol. Thanks for the input guys! :]