Critique my mix

[Kevin Newland]

I'm new to posting on forum's and such, however i have spent alot of time reading them over the past year, after a ton of new research here is a minute or so clip of just something i threw together, short vox piece at the end...not much of a vocalist. Looking for helpfull critiques on my mixing!
Thanks, Btw not that it matters, i have been in 2 bands that both have recorded with Brian Hood & Jamie King

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/4650518/New mix 21.mp3

 

[DullElysium]

I'm new to posting on forum's and such, however i have spent alot of time reading them over the past year, after a ton of new research here is a minute or so clip of just something i threw together, short vox piece at the end...not much of a vocalist. Looking for helpfull critiques on my mixing!
Thanks, Btw not that it matters, i have been in 2 bands that both have recorded with Brian Hood & Jamie King

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/4650518/New mix 21.mp3

I thinks you should post this in the "off-topic" section. This thread is just to discuss that this forum needs a "rate my mix"-section.

Those guitars are kinda good but drums sound really fake. Well you can't really program cymbals to sound as they would be played by a real drummer. But work on those drums! They need more velocities.

 

[jimwilbourne]

the drums are definitely killing the mix.

the guitars need some EQ work done as well. that'll help open up some space in your mix.