Critique my mix

You need to make that an mp3. No one is going to wait for that to load.
 
Obviously it's instrumental. but yeah, I know the snare is a little too loud. and they are humanized a little, but the gravity blasts sound so bad when I do it more than they are now. I know what to do though to fix it.

oh, and how can I get it to sound louder? The only thing I know that actually works for me is gclip on the master mix, which I know is not how anyone else does it. I tried to comp and limit, but it's just pumping
 
Guitars are pretty dry, the drums (snare especially) are too loud and robotic. Try humanizing the fills and blasts and lower them in volume.

+1 to that. guitars need to be a bit louder, 0:11 to the end i couldn't hear them barely at all.
 
Guitars are indeed dry. More treble and that would give them more depth and perhaps turning them up. What's your method? One take hard left and one take hard right?
 
What do you mean dry? No reverb? Cause I don't really want a reverb sound. And really, I thought they were a tad too trebly. Oh, and yes 1 take hard left and 1 take hard right.

What else? I'm looking for questions about how each instrument is done so people can help me get a louder fuller mix. The guitars are tight enough right?

Oh, and you mean a higher tuning or more perfect cause they were pretty perfectly in tune.