critique my mix

[indecizo]

http://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/28110505/SongSnippet.mp3

 

[ToneAddict]

Sounds good. Kick and snare are a bit thin and it's not a very interesting mix but it's good.

 

[Nikolas Quemtri]

Hi,
I'd say it is kinda muddy.
As for the drums, noisy cymbals, clicky snare & kick.
Try to use more clear and bright cab on the guitars as well.

 

[P-E]

Though everything would benefit from a bit of EQing, there are two elements to the mix that are really distracting. First, the guitars' low mids and bass need to be tamed as they are really boomy. Second, the cymbals are really washy, to the point where it's pretty hard to hear what's going on. Once this is fix, it'll be easier for you to hear how the rest of the mix can be improved.

 

[indecizo]

Everything said is exactly as I thought except I thought the guitars were too bright already. Thank you.