Critique this Mix (breakdown with choirs)

[AntonioPetrole]

My ears are very tired. At this point i think the guitars are muddy, and the snare sucks. Im having so much trouble with the snare and i dont know why. It always just sounds to dry and loud. Any pointers?

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2113488/CLIP Less Snare.mp3

 

[Backe]

yeah, roll back on the snare a bit and add some damn verb too it! it sounds super dry. guitars actually worked nice for the part, but you can't really tell when the kick stands for all the attack in those kinds of riffs. maybe drop all the ambient shit a couple of db's (strings & choir) for a more epic feel.

 

[Laneismusic]

what are you using for guitars? they sound really empty imo. Turn them up too! The choir needs to be in the back like "BAcke" said.

oh and snare sounds over compressed. But my ears are tired from mixing all day so idk lol

 

[donimoines]

i just think he needs to brighten / add more attack the guitars and turn them a tad up, and may have to bring the other instruments up also.