Deathless Upstairs Utopia

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Deathless Upstairs Utopia
By: Mark R. Sosa
Death's Door @ www.death777.com
Copyright 2004


I. Religions Medusa / Nocturnal Death Requiem

Religions Medusa compelling ceremonial mask of unveiled soul impaling lunacy
Enduringly imbalances one's dream box tempo with
Un-deciphering graceless dementia and multiplied indicators of obscurity
Carnalities' unrivalled sequential open-aired 3rd hour tribulation crucifixion exhibition
Endeavored insightfully to transfigure the Servant Savior's predestined will
For all humankind to unobstructedly immerse and partake
In Heaven's ever-present undefiled deathless upstairs utopia
Yet succumbing to an unceasing nocturnal death requiem


II. Spiritually Malnourished Christians / Present-Day Death Checkmate

Christianities' spiritually malnourished, boxed-in ego, sanitarium dictating brethren
Surmise as infantile symbols of deliverance
Their crawling, spiraling derailment impulses of unbearable judgment dominion
Plagues responsive converts and earth-roaming cynics alike
These inaccurate, inanimate salvation figurines
Discernibly justify mortalities present-day death checkmate


III. Catholicism's Flesh Stapling Cathedral Ghouls / Festive Masturbation Techniques

Catholicism's elite genitalia enhanced and ignited priesthood of cathedral ghouls
Who manually flesh staple the inexperienced and untainted virginity of youth
By readjusting their remorseless think tanks by internally implanting
Lethal semen doses of abysmal anal anguish and
By acquainting these wide-eyed unstained apprentices
In the arts of festive masturbation merrymaking techniques


IV. Conveyor Belts Of Blasphemic Idolatry / Outlined Concocted Immorality

Humanities' natural selection via conveyor belts of blasphemic idolatry
Reinforces the hexing stuffing amidst one's zoning patterns of spiritual intellect
Oxygen intake not recycled into real world euphoria
Lies devoid to be routinely incinerated by outlined concocted immorality


V. Temptations Summoning Initiations / Homo-sapiens Detonator

Temptations concealed and embedded succulent summoning initiations
Gyrate one's physical sectors to catastrophic explorations
Echoing vocalized audible sensations induce catapulting gratifications
Yet once the Homo-sapiens detonator rebounds to normalcy
Individual accountability intensifies 1,000,000 times
Mocking you then unhesitatingly forsaking you
To a solitary confinement to re-intervene and reconsider
Your much distorted and mangled thought processes


VI. Homosexuality's Vomiting Affirmations / Lesbian's Skanky Kitty Litter-Box

Homosexuality's incessant repetitive mouth vomiting affirmations
Continually miscarriage in all their endeavors
To affiliate neutral amongst the serene legions of heterosexuality
Lesbianism's widespread public appalling "Butch" facial masks
Only foster contorted mental disability
Their inflamed merging lustful agendas for inhabited
Skanky kitty litter-box mutual carpet munching superiority
Shall be vetoed from any inclusion for an accustomed family tree genealogy


VII. Middle Eastern Tasmanian Devil-Like Dictation / Cat's Narrative Urination Artistry

Middle Eastern entranced and prostrate positioned zombies
Who's Tasmanian devil-like spine bloodcurdling dictation of
Phonetic reverberation incantations
Conjure up their immobile, Baphomet-like demi-gods
For a submerged stew of abominable 666 fleshly defilement
Via the carved up and dissected anatomies of Borneo Blood Pythons,
Vampire Squids, Naked Mole Rats, and Hog Badgers
To perfect their ceremonial nether world heinous and desecrating
Benumbing blood-bath confirmation
Upon re-exposure and underworld pit prophet ocular clarity
Black lights flaunt the glowing signs of the Second Death prophecy
Taken from the multitudes of cats' prior narrative urination artistry


VIII. Misconstrued Christianity 2004 / Carnalities Earplugs, Fetish Hourglasses

Indestructible salvation obliterates the earlier nocturnally-beaten imagination
To an abounding and extolling internal rebirth manifestation
Once this real world testament of your enchanted conquest activates
It empowers you to unriddle and disassemble
Straight jacket religion and all of its abysmal affiliates
Christianity 2004 is widely misconstrued
By modern believers' examples of relationless faith
Who socially act out their innermost unseeded phobic neurosis
In worldwide scenarios of uncivilized, unbridled hate
Transparent love is Christ's aspirations for this human race
Spiritual legitimacy, unimpaired integrity
Apparent footprints in your life story towards flourishing prosperity
Carnalities' earplugs, pentagram branded tongues
Fetish hourglasses of uncomplimentary yet concise flesh slashing
Stalks one's cranium brain coconut from a regularly scheduled
Stormless survival time of a Christ centered accountability


IX. Death's Door's Devotional Daybook / Great Pearly Gate Opener

Death's Door reiterates from this, my devotional daybook
Though my spirit substance yearns for a deep-rooted and persistent purity
I do at times stumble into the stoning trenches of iniquity
For faultless perfection is an earthly impossibility
In reaping at certain intervals my disobedient mischief devilry
The Great Pearly Gate Opener shall both whitewash and enlighten me
By HIS still small voice the LORD declares -
"For I know the plans I have for you, plans to PROSPER you and
NOT harm you, plans to give you HOPE and a FUTURE."
"Then you will call upon me and come and pray to me, and
I WILL LISTEN to you." "You will SEEK me and FIND me,
When you SEEK me with all your heart, I WILL BE FOUND BY YOU."
(Jeremiah 29:11-13)
 
Lordlucid,

Hey there, thanks for stopping by and checking out my post :)

AsModEe and Wolftribe,

Hello there, this writing is condemning Religion and people who live in boxes in their life. Homosexuality and Lesbianism isn't cool, and I'm tired of it being pushed on me by the media. In having a personal relationship with Jesus Christ and not religion, such as the Middle East where it's ok to kill Christians and those who don't believe in their "religion", Jesus has a wonderful plan for all who seek and find HIM!

Mark
 
Look, I'm no homosexual but I know that these people didn't choose their sexuality ( I do know some homosexuals/lesbians ), if they are condemned to suffer because of what they are, then we all deserve the same suffering for being so stupid. If one human deserves death more than another one because of his nature ( not his acts ), than we deserve the same fate as everyone is equal in my mind ( by nature, not by acts ). I hope you, and the rest of the forum, understands what I mean. It would have been clearer in french... oh well. The rest you wrote was huh.. I don't know, it sounded weird as I read your summary. Do we even know if Jesus is up there in Heaven? Is there a Heaven? Do souls exist in order to go to Heaven? If you condemn religion, why do you talk about some meeting with Jesus? Sounds illogical to me.

BTW, considering the fact that my nick comes from the name of a demon from modern demonology doesn't mean I believe in any particular religion. It just sounded cool, so that's why I chose it as my nick. ( Asmodeus is the real name of the demon )
 
Birthday:
February 18th
Biography:
I like any kind of metal, from black metal to power. Naming all bands I listen to would be pretty long...
Location:
Quebec, Qc, Canada
Interests:
Playing guitar, training myself, video games
Occupation:
Full time student


sounds like a nob to me
 
Only until he drops a steamy pile o' Godshit.

(This is after this post was discussed with Glenn)

Glenn (7:44:32 PM): What about the parts that nutrify?
NL_Capone (7:44:55 PM): They eventually get dissolved and used.
NL_Capone (7:45:06 PM): and from that, further excreted.
NL_Capone (7:45:37 PM): so, godsweat, godpiss, godfart, and godbreath.
NL_Capone (7:45:44 PM): I would not look forward to the last two.
 
Alright, I couldn't even read five lines of that. The poem is stuffed far too much with pretension: "Religions Medusa compelling ceremonial mask of unveiled soul impaling lunacy." You're just asking for a "What the fuck?" It's not terrible, but you have to realize something, either absolutely no one will understand it (which is not always a bad thing, it can sometimes still be enjoyable, but check out the next point) or you will bore the reader to death. Cut out all of the unnecessary adjectives, and consider this: imagery.
 
Hehe. There's some kind of attempt to sound intelligent that doesn't work with me.

And NoLordy Capone's pic always make me laugh. This family should kill itself with the dad's knife.