Demo song i was mixing for fun to our band (somekinda death/metalcore)

Sep 20, 2009
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I started to fool around with this song we recorded yesterday, any suggestions or opinions and what sould i do otherwise with the sound politics? The outro is weird just to remind that it should sound like bananaholic cockmunch. Bash the shit outta me hombres! :) :devil:

1st http://dl.dropbox.com/u/7606286/startrekrererk.mp3

2nd: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/7606286/rapaskatirr.mp3

3rd: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/7606286/uusiopolvidöödiksest.mp3

4th: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/7606286/uusiopolvidöödiksest2.mp3 (almost same than the 3rd but maby more low-end @gtrs)
 
Not knocking the song, but the guitar tones are almost too painful to listen to. Way too icepick'y sounding as is.

Also, the guitars are a little too loud in the mix, atm.

The double bass drums sound a little flat too.
 
Guitars could use some work. Maybe some work on the snare during the blasts and fills. Seems too loud and too much the same volume sometimes.
 
I don't know exactly what Hz/kHz you'd need to boost, but the guitars could definitely benefit from adding some "low end" to them.