Djenty type thing, Tell me what you think

Feb 7, 2011
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http://dl.dropbox.com/u/22119678/djentytest.wav

So i decided I wanted to take a stab a tubey type clean tone for an intro, with the glitch vst i just found into a more heavy version of basically the same riff. This is just the intro until the first chorus of the song because i haven't written the rest, but I think the concept is cool. I havent eqed the guitars yet but they sound alright.
 
I think the transition was pretty choppy not very smooth, try and keep that intro lead thing rolling through to the breakdown. As for the drums all sounds well but that snare needs to go down a lot other than that it sounds pretty dope brah
 
Also with that intro I think it would be pretty cool when the drums kick in to play that riff in a 3rd that'll sound siqqq as fuck
 
I dig it. Can't really judge the mix though (shitty headphones) just wanted to say I dig it. :D Keep it up!