Fall Into Oblivion- Death from Sweden :)

[nestergaard]

Here is my newest song, called Fall Into Oblivion.
What do you think? Need to change anything?

here is the link to the song on my SoundCloud:

http://soundcloud.com/nestergaard/fall-into-oblivion

 

[nestergaard]

Something I can improve?

 

[WalhallaM]

Kick and snare less slamming,nice guitar sound,bass not so loud,vocal louder(1-2 db).Like the song,Emperor vibe,especially vocals.

 

[nestergaard]

I will make a new mix and post it here

 

[nestergaard]

Made a new mix.
Hope its better
http://soundcloud.com/nestergaard/fall-into-oblivion-mix-2

 

[WalhallaM]

It's better but drums are still slamming,kick actually could stay like this,what I would do,duplicate snare and change it to be softer,snare sound is ok during blast-beats so you can automate parts with two snares and automate bass guitar on couple places (0:53-1:09),but this is maybe a matter of taste,I like bass sound remains beneath guitars.And you can turn up drum volume up butt just make them a little softer.