FINALLY! some new music from me.

[DreamNeonBlack]

New song I've been working on with my friend Kevin whom I've previously worked on Stirring with.
I'm waiting for the addition of a guitar solo from *someone* and then the final mix but this is pretty close.

Streaming version only right now, hope you guys like it.

http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?PID=1093691&T=2146

 

[Chromatose]

tearssss of sorrowsssss lameeeeeeeeeeeeeeeent

 

[DreamNeonBlack]

well, it isn't as good as tears of sorrows lament, but what is?
That band is breaking bold new ground.

 

[Chromatose]

hahahahah yeah

but hey it's pretty grood, vocals are gaymazing as usual, though the riffs are bit too much boring chuggah chuggah, hopefully the solo will liven that up.

I love those high background vocal bits

 

[DreamNeonBlack]

wheeew! I was going for gaymazing. Glad to see I hit the mark on that. har har
See, i like the chugga chugga music. I know it isn't all super technical but when Kevin sends me his songs I usually have vocal ideas by the end of the first listen. So it clicks fo us somehow. He sends these nice doomy sounding songs and I go and fuck them up with melody and crap.


yeah the high backing vocals in the chorus are my favorite part.

 

[Chromatose]

but hey it's pretty grood,

What did I mean by that?!

MYSTERY COMMENT

 

[DreamNeonBlack]

You meant that hamburgers with cheese and bacon ground into the meat are the greatest thing ever!

 

[WhiteBeastofWotan]

I have never had such a thing, and now I feel that I must.

 

[Chromatose]

I was reading a book on grilling at Barnes n' Noble recently and putting bacon INTO the burger meat was one of the recipes. I was like "whoa! CRAZZZZZZZZY"

 

[DreamNeonBlack]

A few of the super markets here make hamburgers in thier deli departments like that. You can buy the patties with mushrooms and cheese or bacon and cheese ground in. Take them home, cook them up and WHOA heaven!

 

[FretsAflame]

Dan, nice job on the vox. I'm not a fan of the song but it's well sung.

 

[tered]

You meant that hamburgers with cheese and bacon ground into the meat are the greatest thing ever!

It's pre-emptive strike into the food topic.

 

[Jeff-Loomis-fan]

i think the song is awesome good job

 

[azal]

good vocals, they have a rob lowe vibe. Not very memorable though after two listens.

The guitars sound like there's not enough string tension and they are going out of tune slightly when vibrating, and the last riff is terrible imo.

overall, good stuff though.

 

[schenkadere]

zzzzzzzzzzzzz...uninspiring and unoriginal but not completely horrible...good singer, decent production...same old, same old...sorry...wanted to dig it...just being honest.

 

[DreamNeonBlack]

Thank you everyone for taking the time to give the song a listen. I appreciate it.

 

[Reverand Joint Smoker]

Flotsam and Jetsamish... purty good!

 

[Dead Winter]

I really dig the chugga chugga, but I think the vocals need to be a little less Warrel-ish. A little more aggression would do the trick, imo. They kinda seemed to stay along the same level the whole song...a little too monotone. But the background vox fading in and out...dude...you gotta use that to your advantage. They should be leading INTO something face-melting. The vox are great for the verse, but they don't go anywhere after that...lead them into something wailing, dude. Like, Ripper Owens wailing. Those background vox would be a perfect lead-in for that!!!

Good stuff, nonetheless!!!!