First mix I've done-also first post

[Mattbrownn]

http://soundcloud.com/mattbrown-3/done-kinda



im just getting into recording and production, i finished recording my first little song this morning. I used pod farm and ezdrummer. i know its not great,im just looking for tips and suggestions

 

[leaky24]

Sounds like its played in my bathroom

Have you got alot of reverb going on?
If so get rid.

 

[oroinvictus]

It sounds like you played the track on speakers and you recorded it from the other side of the house. Your guitars need a lot more volume and a lot more gain, and during quite a few parts it sounds like you've copy/pasting the same take(s) over and over. Drums need compression, volume and panning.