first mix : kinda the chariot-ish?

[corymg]

i know the clip is short. (like 10 sconds)
just looking to know if this is a good start for just getting into recording.
mostly just the tone and the mix sits well.

snare might be a tad loud idk.

was trying for sort of a "the chariot" type of thing.

thanks


https://www.dropbox.com/s/ozkeqnnxj5pxq9f/first mix.mp3?dl=0