first mix need help

[rockafromhell6]

hey all im new to this forum and i was just wondering if anyone could give me any help on making this sound better

https://dl.getdropbox.com/u/926133/untitled2.mp3

im going to be adding drums later. i need to learn how to mix drums aswell better so we'll see how that goes


but any help on improving the little mix would be greatly appreciated

by the way its not that long being im still working on the song i just wanna have a solid template to use when i add the rest

 

[digitaldeath]

Add drums and bass then get back to us, cuz at the moment, to me it just sounds like a one-armed blind kid entering his first "soggy-biscuit" wankfest!

 

[DanLights]

I'm no expert, but I think those guitars won't work well in a mix. But as ermz says, get drums and bass, your title says "first mix", but it's not a mix if you ain't MIXING the guitars with something

edit: the guitars are really out of sync with each other, on some parts it sounds on purpose and on others it sounds like a total bloody mess, at least to my ears

 

[rockafromhell6]

yeh ill probably rerecord it tonight reaper just started lagging really bad and it kinda fucked up my timing.