First "Real" mix I ever did

[Woppah]

So this is from just over a year ago, this was the first proper mix I ever did, really did not have a clue of anything(still don't really at all now but a bit a little bit better now!) I was listening back I though it didn't actually sound too bad. what do you reckon?
http://soundcloud.com/spittinbones/information-overload

 

[ATLA]

honestly your drums and bass are the weakpoints of the mix. try to balance out your low end with some hp eqs on the kick and bass. the vocals and guitars dont sound too bad. the kick needs more BEEF and the snare more attack.