Fixation On The Darkness (Cover) - Slate 3.0, Gearbox, Logic

Can someone confirm if this link is working for them?
Cus when my friend tries to listen, it says ''your not authorised to be here make an account'' etc etc
 
That first clip, nothing.. to any of it.

2nd clip, the guitars have a tad compression, and obviously used a different snare, with a little EQ and reverb

Just wanted to upload the complete basics of the track, no mixing, and see if anyone had any tips for mixing it
 
im still thinking kick needs to be louder (and snare too but just a little bit)
or simply turn down a little the guitars

otherwise...i really like the sound !!


(which slate snare are you using? i really like it)
 
im still thinking kick needs to be louder (and snare too but just a little bit)
or simply turn down a little the guitars

otherwise...i really like the sound !!


(which slate snare are you using? i really like it)

It's Snare 22, yea i'll give it a bit of actual mixing over the weekend, see if i can improve on it.