Give me some tips to improve my mixing

[parisowar]

Please give me some tips to improve this.

I am not a profesional and this is my first time i work with a band

http://soundcloud.com/parisowar/redeemer-19june-finalized

 

[ArthurD]

Wrong section

 

[parisowar]

Wrong section

you are right. There is also a post in the Rate my mix section. Could you please give me some feedback there?

http://www.ultimatemetal.com/forum/rate-my-mix-tone-threads/794327-suggestions-heavy-metal-mix.html

Regards