Help improving this mix!

[s2c]

Hey, I need opinions about this mix, what can I do to make it sound better.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/4024859/Dead%20Silent%20Track%2008.mp3

Cheers

 

[Morgorroth]

sounds brutal but the transition from the intro to the actual song is a bit harsh, maybe try to make it a bit smoother. Apart from I dig the sound and the song.
Cheers

 

[Scott Horner]

^ What he said.

 

[s2c]

Thanks for the comments, the cymbals and the bass are my main concern at this time, never sure if they are in the "right" levels.

 

[xeroxed88]

I'm loving the guitar tone, man. It sounds monstrous.

 

[s2c]

Thanks man, it´s my old E530 definitely my best tone so far.

 

[s2c]

Hey, I changed the intro transition, sound better?

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/4024859/Dead%20Silent%20Track%2008.mp3

Cheers and thanks for helping

 

[morten.nu]

Liking this, but it's on the bright side. Maybe lose some highs and beef up the low end?

 

[s2c]

Hey, new update, less bright I hope opinions please.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/4024859/Dead%20Silent%20Track%2008.mp3

Cheers