Help Me please, my biggest enemy is doubt

[Demonstealer]

So here is a mix. I just keep getting my confidence shattered everytime I listen to a pro mix and it's louder always. I'm trying very hard to avoid the 'loudness' factor and just mix and master and keep it real.

Anyway so here is something I'd be grateful if you can critique. I'd put a thread earlier titled 'Secret Death Metal Project'

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/1953726/Track 03 MIX VER2-MASTERED.mp3

 

[Bay Studio]

I´m on laptop speakers right now, i can give it better critique later on. But what i can hear over the laptop speakers is heavy high end fizz on the guitars. Cant really judge low-end etc. so i´ll get back to you later!

 

[marios.blythe]

@bay_studio i agree.. fizzy guitars,and and i don't like the kick.. otherwise its good i think

 

[Demonstealer]

So I made a bit of an update to it.

Give it a spin now.

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/1953726/Track 03 - Ver3 - Mastered.mp3

 

[Mashreef]

over midrange on the guitar's which kinda sounds boxy..
Bass and guitar are fighting with each other
overheads are super harsh
too much SSSSsss on the vocals