Help me with this pop punk mix!

[setyouranchor]

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/7188427/SebGoonie2.mp3

First mix/master

Been writing some pop punk stuff as I have some spare time and miss writing music!

 

[setyouranchor]

HOLY BUMP!

 

[AaronDylan]

Hey! think it´s going in the right direction!!

imo the lead guitar sounds kinda weak and thin! maybe some room or more verb or low end.

the kick could use a bit more punch as i like pop punk with that sound real punchy!

have a nice one

 

[setyouranchor]

Hey! think it´s going in the right direction!!

imo the lead guitar sounds kinda weak and thin! maybe some room or more verb or low end.

the kick could use a bit more punch as i like pop punk with that sound real punchy!

have a nice one

Thanks mate. I know what you mean about the lead. It sounds quite thin and brittle. I quite like the kick but that's just me!

 

[Spiritbeast]

In the beginning, the lead guitar kind of reminds me of those lead guitar soundfonts I had when I was younger! So it could use a little work there.
But I really like the rest, especially how the synths are mixed in so well! Most of the pop punk bands I see trying to mix in these synths just sound awkward... either too loud, too quiet... yours sit right in!

 

[setyouranchor]

Seems to be my lead needing work!

Thank you the synth is just a logic stock one which i compressed