Hey Will!!!!

[Troyanasy]

I;m ignored EVERY where ware
could you help me with this Pweese
I'm trying to right(write(( some solo's, leads or A.K.A the 18% boring part of the song haha.
This is a Metal Place..Metal Ears... I would love some feedback, and I'm U"used to insults and "It ain't no Bon Jovi" comments or "get some feel"
or "you suck" I'm hear that all the time from *******'s sister
Anyways: Click For Fun BonZai

http://www.yourfilehost.com/media.php?cat=audio&file=_Volatile.mp3


http://www.yourfilehost.com/media.php?cat=audio&file=haha.mp3

http://www.yourfilehost.com/media.php?cat=audio&file=3582crazierer.mp3

and here is a e.g of n o feel hehe
http://www.yourfilehost.com/media.php?cat=audio&file=3835nothal.mp3

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[Will Bozarth]

the 2nd one is a bit sloppy, it could sound really cool if that one were a bit neater

my favorite is the first, definitely. you do some cool stuff in there!

 

[DreamNeonBlack]

it ain't no Bon Jovi