Hey you guyyysss!

[Nickeatszombies]

Heres a clip of something I recorded here. Can I get a bowl of constructive criticism please?

Guitars were POD Farm (surprise)

I feel like its lacking something...

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/4456768/song 1.mp3

Attempt #2
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/4456768/song 1attempt2.mp3

 

[professorlamp]

lol, copy and paste?
I could hear clicks and pops halfway through the song , bit of a giveaway

 

[Nickeatszombies]

Oi, I did. Im just practicing teh mix.

Though I suppose I could practice teh edit while im at it

 

[zirkonflex]

Its lacking high mids.

And whoa, that bass is woofy ... Id suggest you go over that with an EQ and Bass compressor
Oh, and the Hihat sticks oout wierdly.
I like the song though.

 

[Nickeatszombies]

Thanks for the help Zirkon!

I tweaked around 1100 a little bit. Hit the Bass with some EQ
and compression. Didn't do anything about the Hi-Hat though

This is what I came up with.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/4456768/song 1attempt2.mp3

 

[Dalinkwent48@aim.com]

Before anything make sure you get the editing right, its still popping. And the mix is still real bass heavy its burying the kick and rythm guits.

 

[Nickeatszombies]

Updated again

I haven't tried to fix the popping until now
thats probably why it was still in there.
Hopefully I got the spot you two were talking about.

Also the Bass, is it too loud or just needs more EQ?
I just dropped the volume a little bit in this mix.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/4456768/song 1attempt2.mp3