Hi guys! First time dude, need crits

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I just found out about this forum and Im pretty excited that the dude who produces a lot of my favorite bands has his own forum dedicated to his own sound. While Im not striving to emulate him, since I'm fairly new to this whole producing thing, Sturgis' sound is something I reference too when Im recording/mixing. Anyway, this is my first attempt at mixing/producing. It's a song for my band and just give me some brutal (but constructive) criticism because as I said I'm learning a lottttttttttttttt.

Thank you all!




EDIT: Soundcloud pulled the track for some odd reason (original composition, dunno why) Here is the mediafire link:

http://www.mediafire.com/?idsrfot396c2ndc