How bout this mix?

I'm not the best person to criticize a mix because I'm starting but I have to say that sounds good for me.

The only point that I'd like to emphasize is that at the end the cymbals get more importance than the guitar that for my taste it wouldn't to be like this and maybe the low end eats the highs... :S

Sorry for not being a great help. :p
 
It sounds like your snare could use a clipper on it. It seems to be losing a lot of its transients. I would also recommend maybe backing off ever so slightly on the compression on the whole mix, particularly the cymbals and kick. I would also try and make smaller eq moves on the guitars. Sounds somewhat like you might be sucking too much out of them. Other than that it sounds bawlzy.