How can I improve this track? (Underoath/decoderish)

[hks350d]

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/11232680/TheTraveler.mp3

already worked it for a client but i like to improve

tell me everything that you think could be improved
tell me what I'm doing wrong here

you guys are awesome

 

[Tim HLAH]

this sounds very cool, good band too.
i wouldn't change a thing, but if i had to pick something.. maybe too much super high fizz going on in the gtrs?

 

[hks350d]

Yeah they were getting a little fizzy for sure.

I bought Pod Farm just for this session and didn't know at all what to do haha whole lotta program

What monitors are you listening on just curious?

 

[Tim HLAH]

m-audio BX8a's

 

[Sacha]

Just listening on laptop speakers here, good mix! Some tuning artifacts it sounded like on the clean vocals and some odd notes. Guitars could be a bit clearer at times perhaps...