Hows this for a mix?

[doclegion]

I POSTED A NEW LINK!! http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=3E7A99A82C83A16D If anyone could tell me what they think or has an opinion on my mix or sound i have posted a link to hear it. It will take a minute to download but its the whole song i dont know how to chop it. If anyone could tell me what they think that would help Thanks

 

[lilhermiejobo]

my first reaction "obituary". I dont know if thats the sound you're going for but as far as the guitars and drums sound, I'm picking up some old school metal vibes. Very cool man. Let me know when you post the whole tune I'd like to jam to this. You're doing great so far, keep it up man!!!