How's this?

[morten.nu]

Mixed on headphones in the winter. Can't decide if it's salvageable.

edit - please see below

 

[oroinvictus]

I think the drums need some work, but the guitar tone is fine.

 

[morten.nu]

edit - please see below

 

[clefbits]

Hi!

Nicely done, congratulations!

I would choose v-1. Drums sound a little bit better on this mix.

 

[morten.nu]

Thanks!

 

[Ola Englund]

sounds cool dude, but is there a bass guitar in there somewhere? For this kind of groovy stuff I would thin out the guitars and make the bass fat as hell.
The music would probably benefit from it.

 

[morten.nu]

sounds cool dude, but is there a bass guitar in there somewhere? For this kind of groovy stuff I would thin out the guitars and make the bass fat as hell.
The music would probably benefit from it.

This any better?

http://soundcloud.com/morten-nu/metal-track-v-1-more-bass

 

[morten.nu]

http://soundcloud.com/morten-nu/to-hunger-v-2

Could you please let me know which of these two versions you prefer?