I Need Your Critique Of Something!

Virus

Proud IMG Guitarist
Apr 17, 2001
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I've had a riff going round in my head for ages now and tonight decided to sit down and work on it a bit... I've recorded a very rough mix giving the jist of the song and would really like to hear what you all think of it with any suggestions you have to make it better! :)

You can get it here... http://www.ironmaiden.pwp.blueyonder.co.uk/song/

Ignore the bad timing and being out of tune! ;)
 
Cool riff Virus. Nice heavy tone too! I don't have any criticism's of it, it sounds like a solid foundation for a good song to me.:)
 
Thanks EC!!!

That would be mega if you tooled with it and bounced some idea's, I come up with loads of riffs but as far as putting them into any sort of song I really struggle! :D