...i try

[deadair]

how's this?

http://www.randrlaser.com/test.htm

 

[xfer]

remove the first two commas entirely.

 

[deadair]

i'm not talking about the text...

 

[mindspell]

Times font needs to go. Otherwise it looks alright. Better than the current one...

 

[deadair]

i'm totally not a designer... totally not

 

[xfer]

jake's phone number is on that site!!!!111

 

[xfer]

okay if you weren't asking about the content and you weren't asking about the design, what were you asking about?

 

[Josh Seipp]

I like it, except for the font!

 

[avi]

left-hand image needs to be less wide, more margin between it and the text. or maybe put the text over an image? instead of the white bkgnd? the extreme indentation is weird, unless there's gonna be other menu stuff on the left.

serifed fonts are the sux.

 

[deadair]

how about that font?

and the size... i need to get something in between what i have and the next size smaller.

the left margin is weird, i feel ya there.

 

[avi]

verdana is the defacto web standard. or tahoma.

 

[TheNewChupe]

in the paragraph, replace the 4th 't' with a 'b'

 

[goatschool]

Let your motor race
Pick it up
And get this mother gone
Out from and far away
The wooden snake
This thing has got me on

 

[The Dope]

Diamond rope silver chain
Pretty noose is a pretty pain
And I don't like
What you got me hanging from