some pitches on the vocals are still a bit off imo
Also they could be a bit more tamed, dynamic wise...
Guitars are boxy on the "heavier" parts, it works on the strummed/crunchy though.
hm...at the beginning there's a lot of fx going on in the vocals but the guitars are pretty dry, I'd try to even that out a bit...if there's so much going on at the vocals then the guitars seems pretty "meh" in comparison, if you get what I mean.
The eq relationship of guitars/vox could also a bit better, but I guess you just want a totally different guitarsound than what I would go for.
Something is strange with the overheads, but I can't put a finger on it...maybe they are a bit mid heavy
overall I think it feels like the singer is doing a bit over her abilities...not really enough on pitch for some of the stuff she is trying to do.
Which is a pitty, cause she's got a really cool voice!
Nice song and style too.