is this mix fat?

[KBMoser]

Im working with a local vocalist and i was to present this for her to work with.
Opinions would appreciated.

http://db.tt/TbEGdIZf

 

[lanky noob]

i know it might sound stupid but maybe the snare could be a little bit less punchy and you coul bring the kick down a bit?

just my opinion though, it's still better than what i could do :L

 

[jElliott]

I think the snare is too loud & bass guitar needs to be much bigger to sound like my kind of fat mix.

 

[KBMoser]

Sure thing bud 0_o

 

[KBMoser]

Can i hear one of your mixes?

 

[Redline4]

Fat doesn't mean loud man, just turn that snare down a bit. Btw I like it overall

 

[KBMoser]

Dont put words in my mouth.

 

[professorlamp]

Taking critisicm like a champ
Turn that snare down, it's wayy too loud

 

[mairomaster]

+1

Turn it down, really.

 

[oroinvictus]

Definitely turn the snare down. Everything else sounds good though.

 

[jackbraglia]

Taking critisicm like a champ
Turn that snare down, it's wayy too loud

hahah yea seriously! don't post looking for opinions if you can't take any negative ones. you should've put a disclaimer: "only compliments of my mix will be tolerated"

i agree with what everyone else has been saying. turn the snare down and it will hide its overly sample-ish sound. also the kick is too "metal" for this song, but the level is right.