Sup? 
I was dickin around this morning writing this riff and worked this up.
I'm just trying to get the starting point of the mix laid out and was curious what some better ears thought it might need to get it going in the right direction.
The clip is short, The riffin is a little sloppy and loose, but they are just scratch tracks for now,,, but how does the overall mix sound? I have a few thoughts, but what do you think? what are some points to tweak up?
Any thoughts and critique's would be most appreciated.
MOSHON
DAVE

I was dickin around this morning writing this riff and worked this up.
I'm just trying to get the starting point of the mix laid out and was curious what some better ears thought it might need to get it going in the right direction.
The clip is short, The riffin is a little sloppy and loose, but they are just scratch tracks for now,,, but how does the overall mix sound? I have a few thoughts, but what do you think? what are some points to tweak up?
Any thoughts and critique's would be most appreciated.
MOSHON
DAVE
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