It's going in the right way?

Sounds good man. The drums are a bit too robotic, but not too much, so nice attempt with them so far.
What are the guitars? They sound pretty good and have a nice balance with the bass. They sound a tad overly digital.
When you're doing the synchronised palm muted part with the drums, there's quite a lot of extra fuzz than there should be which isn't ideal.
 
Sounds good man. The drums are a bit too robotic, but not too much, so nice attempt with them so far.
What are the guitars? They sound pretty good and have a nice balance with the bass. They sound a tad overly digital.
When you're doing the synchronised palm muted part with the drums, there's quite a lot of extra fuzz than there should be which isn't ideal.


Hey Pman!. Thanks a lot for your advice, really nice constructive way. I have take again the mix and this is the result, better now?.

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/4750104/Ojo Cuidao 1.mp3

Cheers!