Just read "The Systematic Mixing Guide" any advice appreciated

This isnt bad at all, I have a few small critiques, the guitars are a few db loud imo, maybe some kind of warmth style plug to dull them a touch, they are just a bit harsh overall, the leads could be smoother sounding I want a small bell boost in the right spot in the 200-400 area, more of a neck pickup sound. I think the drums are a bit dry, even a small hall verb would go a long way on those toms and snare. They also sound a bit stiff, if its midi based I would go in and write some dynamics in there. I would also like a few extra db of kick. All in all it sounds good though.
 
Cool thanks so much! It helps so have a more experienced set of ears take a listen. I'll defiantly make those changes and post back
 
Right on man, I dont know how experienced I am in comparison to some of the heavy weights around here. I just get on kicks where I troll around in here to learn new things or see how others approach things. I think its always beneficial to have some outside perspective because its so easy to get burned out on a mix or just lose perspective.