Let It Snow!!!!!!!!!!!!

[LIZ METAL]

Winter and all its coldness
Seems so surreal and most alive
Like a painting unfinished
Blank white spots to fill
Like a world fading
All colors melt away
But the smell of it is assuring
The smell of the snow
The smell of the coldness
Of the smoke pluming out of chimneys
I can't help but to take this time
To worship the Gods and Goddesses of the North
For this unmistakable beauty
That this forever dawn bares
And this sent of winter
Far beyond compare

 

[IcedEarth556]

Nice peom and nice song you are listening to. I got off school today thanks to snow and its still snowing now! hopefully I'll get off tomorrow too.

 

[LIZ METAL]

Ah thanks I got out early today too...yay! I hope I don't have school tomorrow either! I don't care how many snow days I get, I'm a senior and I get out in May regardless!!! Hail to that!!

 

[Brooks]

We entered Winter once again
Naked, freezing from my breath
Neath the lid all limbs tucked away
This coffin is your abode from now and onwards

Your body is mine to avail
Such a tragic sight you are
Slave under my creed
Spurring me with those tears

 

[LIZ METAL]

These tears of mine
Though from the soul, they freeze from your coldness
You bring winter to my heart's comfort
Your snow blotting out my sun
So dark and grey now
Ice growing like water lilies
Blooming spikes
I see through this blizzard
But what am I to do?

 

[MindInsane]

Nice poem Liz!

Also...Nice poem Mikael!

 

[LIZ METAL]

thanks a score!

 

[davo]

I see
None gods nor goddesses
Create all i behold
Before my eyes
Majestic paintings
Wonderous inventions
Nature's proof to mankind
Of an artist
Of a Creator
Of infinite wisdom
Of love

 

[Valofvalhalla]

Though the cold cuts through me
Blood pierces the deadly ground I stand on
Though my strength subsides
I'm alive inside
Death warms and consumes me.
Encompass the fear they know
Circle my power that causes their weakness
Rise up from the ashes
Heed the powers below.

 

[LIZ METAL]

Here I stand
Overlooking what horror may creep today
But 2 battles are to be fought
One sword for the approaching army
Another for Winter's icey winds

Here I stand
Praying to the Ancient Ones
Gods of War hear my cry
The snows are piling up on the battle field
Valkyries are wrapping their divine bodies up
Ever tighter with their feather cloaks
Awaiting each man's battle end

Here I stand
The sent of this season so strong
My only comfort in war
The snow builds up
As though the Gods are trying to erase their artistic mistakes
Only to give in and lay out spring

 

[Valofvalhalla]

Only death smells of ancient ruin
It is he that I declare my own
Worthy of the hollowed walls
Here the sigh of the deadmans groan

The raven like creature
Flies in the wind
Fair swan maiden
Fairest of kin

Amulets incrusted with powers within
Entrails on heddles show where I've been

Dare me I'm mighty bravest in battle I call
No one mightier shall be received in my hall!

 

[LIZ METAL]

Most fairest, 'tis true
Golden hair and eyes of pure blue
With an aura of a raven hue

But most bloody and vicious is she
Awaiting the most bravest to set free
To bring to her sancuary

Then there she does trade in
Her armour for white linen
Always obeying the will of Odin

So now I pray that should I die
That she takes me at my death cry
On the winter wind's sigh

The battlefield's covered in snow
But I'm covered in glory aglow
I fight with honor to be sent high and not to Niflhiem's low

 

[HUNGER OF THE UNDEAD]

Nice poem, even though I despise snow. Im already sick of winter and its just barely begun.